Update

diff --git a/Index.html.pl b/Index.html.pl
index 9674490..c860a8d 100755 (executable)
--- a/Index.html.pl
+++ b/Index.html.pl
@@ -70,7 +70,7 @@ partition just to exchange files between GNU/Linux and MS-Windows are over!</p>
 <h2>Introducing the <i>Captive NTFS Filesystem</i> for GNU/Linux</h2>
 
 <p>The @{[ a_href '/project/captive/','Captive NTFS' ]} filesystem is an
-installable filesystem for GNU/Linux which allows read/write access to NTFS
+installable filesystem for GNU/Linux, which allows read/write access to NTFS
 partitions created by Microsoft Windows NT, 200x or XP. You can download it
 @{[ a_href '/project/captive/','here' ]}.</p>
 

diff --git a/project/captive/Index.html.pl b/project/captive/Index.html.pl
index b0bbea2..a9b19ae 100755 (executable)
--- a/project/captive/Index.html.pl
+++ b/project/captive/Index.html.pl
@@ -53,10 +53,10 @@ print <<"HERE";
 HERE
 
 my @stuff=(
-               "A lot of people claim themselves as Windows Programmers.\n"
-                               ." Now I can finally join them - I also wrote my own Microsoft Windows.",
-               "Why do they need ".a_href('http://www.winsupersite.com/reviews/winserver2k3_gold2.asp','5000 developers')
-                               ." to write Microsoft Windows when it can be just One Man Show?",
+               "A lot of people claim to be Windows Programmers.\n"
+                               ." Now, I can join them at last - I have also written my own Microsoft Windows.",
+               "Why do they need ".a_href('http://www.winsupersite.com/reviews/winserver2k3_gold2.asp','5,000 developers')
+                               ." to write Microsoft Windows when it can be just a One Man Show?",
 
 
 
@@ -74,7 +74,7 @@ print <<"HERE";
 @{[ vskip "3ex" ]}
 
 <p class="stuff">
-       Why did I install Microsoft Windows and wrote such disgusting piece of code?<br />
+       Why did I install Microsoft Windows and write such a disgusting piece of code?<br />
        Expecting @{[ a_href $W->{"resume_url"},"yet another challenging task" ]}!
 </p>
 
@@ -283,8 +283,8 @@ version containing some 'captive'-essential fixes and extensions.</p></dd>
 
 <dt>@{[ a_href 'http://linux-ntfs.sourceforge.net/','ntfsprogs' ]}</dt>
 <dd><p><b>Original version >=200309071734 sufficient</b>:
-The package downloadable here has no code patches - you can freely use the
-original version instead.  Unfortunately the last public release is
+The package which is downloadable from here, has no code patches - you can freely use the
+original version instead. Unfortunately, the last public release is
 <b>1.7.1</b> while this project requires at least
 @{[ a_href 'http://linux-ntfs.sourceforge.net/snapshots/','snapshot' ]} version
 <b>@{[ a_href 'http://linux-ntfs.sourceforge.net/snapshots/ntfsprogs-200309071734.tar.bz2','200309071734' ]}</b>
@@ -298,7 +298,7 @@ your convenience.</p></dd>
 
 <p>@{[ a_href 'http://lufs.sourceforge.net/lufs/','LUFS' ]} (Linux Userland File
 System) needs Linux kernel module driver (<i>lufs.o</i>) compatible with your
-running Linux kernel. Binary driver is supplied already precompiled for many
+running Linux kernel. The binary driver is supplied already precompiled for many
 Linux kernel versions in the binary packages above (<b>.i386.rpm</b> and
 <b>_i386.deb</b> archives).</p>
 
@@ -310,12 +310,12 @@ distribution vendor. You may need to install package
 Linux kernel version (<b>rpm&nbsp;-q&nbsp;kernel</b>) and re-run <span
 class="quote">/usr/share/lufs/prepmod</span>.</p>
 
-<p><b>WARNING:</b> This 'captive' package may modify your found Linux kernel
+<p><b>WARNING:</b> This 'captive' package may modify your Linux kernel
 sources matching your currently running kernel version. These minor
-modifications may include dependencies rebuild, compiling build tools, fixes of
-several include files etc. All the modifications are done at the mount(8) time
+modifications may include a dependencies rebuild, compiling build tools, fixes of
+several include files, etc. All the modifications are done at the mount(8) time
 by the automatically executed <span class="quote">/usr/share/lufs/prepmod</span> script.
-This behaviour was not present in the original
+This behavior was not present in the original
 @{[ a_href 'http://lufs.sourceforge.net/lufs/','LUFS' ]} distribution
 by @{[ a_href 'http://www.malinux.net/main/','Florin Malita' ]}.</p>
 
@@ -326,13 +326,13 @@ HERE
 print rightimg <<"HERE",'reactos','ReactOS',"a_href"=>'http://www.reactos.com/';
        <h2>The First Open Source MS-Windows Kernel API for Free OS</h2>
 
-       <p>Compatibility with existing binary Microsoft Windows file system drivers was
+       <p>Compatibility with the existing binary Microsoft Windows file system drivers has been
        reached. Microsoft Windows kernel system components required by these drivers
-       were analyzed and successfuly emulated in the GNU/Linux operating system.
-       Project brings Microsoft Windows kernel emulation framework to support even
-       other types Microsoft Windows drivers in the future.
-       <span class="productname">@{[ a_href 'http://www.reactos.com/','ReactOS' ]}</span>
-       code base made a big asset for this functionality.</p>
+       were analyzed and successfully emulated in the GNU/Linux operating system.
+       The project brings the Microsoft Windows kernel emulation framework to support even
+       other types of Microsoft Windows drivers in the future.
+       The <span class="productname">@{[ a_href 'http://www.reactos.com/','ReactOS' ]}</span>
+       code base proved to be a big asset for this functionality.</p>
 HERE
 
 
@@ -345,7 +345,7 @@ print <<"HERE";
 <form action="@{[ top_dir("/Mailman.pl") ]}" method="post">
        <table border="1" class="mailman" style="border-collapse: collapse; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px;">
                <tr>@{[ map("<th>$_</th>",@lists) ]}</tr>
-               <tr><td>New versions announcements<br />
+               <tr><td>New version announcements<br />
                        (low traffic, recommended)</td>
                                <td>User support,<br />bug reports</td>
                                <td>Development</td>

diff --git a/project/captive/ListItem.pm b/project/captive/ListItem.pm
index 440b515..8d56541 100755 (executable)
--- a/project/captive/ListItem.pm
+++ b/project/captive/ListItem.pm
@@ -44,13 +44,13 @@ our @ListItem=(
                "cvs-of 'libntfs://' method"=>"ntfsprogs-gnomevfs",
                "description"=><<"HERE",
 <p>The first full read/write access to NTFS disk drivers was achieved in
-@{[ a_href 'http://www.winehq.com/','Wine' ]} way by using the original
+the @{[ a_href 'http://www.winehq.com/','Wine' ]} way by using the original
 Microsoft Windows <i>ntfs.sys</i> driver. It emulates the required subsystems of
-Microsoft Windows kernel by reuse of one of the original
-<i>ntoskrnl.exe</i>, @{[ a_href 'http://www.reactos.com/','ReactOS' ]} parts or
-this project's own reimplementations, from case to case.</p>
-<p>Involvement of the original driver files was chosen to get the best
-filesystem compatibility and safety ever reachable.</p>
+the Microsoft Windows kernel by reusing one of the original
+<i>ntoskrnl.exe</i>, @{[ a_href 'http://www.reactos.com/','ReactOS' ]} parts, or
+this project's own reimplementations, on a case by case basis.</p>
+<p>Involvement of the original driver files was chosen to achieve the best
+and unprecedented filesystem compatibility and safety.</p>
 HERE
                );