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[www.jankratochvil.net.git] / project / captive / Index.html.pl

diff --git a/project/captive/Index.html.pl b/project/captive/Index.html.pl
index b0bbea2..a9b19ae 100755 (executable)
--- a/project/captive/Index.html.pl
+++ b/project/captive/Index.html.pl
@@ -53,10 +53,10 @@ print <<"HERE";
 HERE
 
 my @stuff=(
 HERE
 
 my @stuff=(

-               "A lot of people claim themselves as Windows Programmers.\n"
-                               ." Now I can finally join them - I also wrote my own Microsoft Windows.",
-               "Why do they need ".a_href('http://www.winsupersite.com/reviews/winserver2k3_gold2.asp','5000 developers')
-                               ." to write Microsoft Windows when it can be just One Man Show?",
+               "A lot of people claim to be Windows Programmers.\n"
+                               ." Now, I can join them at last - I have also written my own Microsoft Windows.",
+               "Why do they need ".a_href('http://www.winsupersite.com/reviews/winserver2k3_gold2.asp','5,000 developers')
+                               ." to write Microsoft Windows when it can be just a One Man Show?",

 
 
 
 
 
 


@@ -74,7 +74,7 @@ print <<"HERE";
 @{[ vskip "3ex" ]}
 
 <p class="stuff">
 @{[ vskip "3ex" ]}
 
 <p class="stuff">

-       Why did I install Microsoft Windows and wrote such disgusting piece of code?<br />
+       Why did I install Microsoft Windows and write such a disgusting piece of code?<br />

        Expecting @{[ a_href $W->{"resume_url"},"yet another challenging task" ]}!
 </p>
 
        Expecting @{[ a_href $W->{"resume_url"},"yet another challenging task" ]}!
 </p>
 


@@ -283,8 +283,8 @@ version containing some 'captive'-essential fixes and extensions.</p></dd>
 
 <dt>@{[ a_href 'http://linux-ntfs.sourceforge.net/','ntfsprogs' ]}</dt>
 <dd><p><b>Original version >=200309071734 sufficient</b>:
 
 <dt>@{[ a_href 'http://linux-ntfs.sourceforge.net/','ntfsprogs' ]}</dt>
 <dd><p><b>Original version >=200309071734 sufficient</b>:

-The package downloadable here has no code patches - you can freely use the
-original version instead.  Unfortunately the last public release is
+The package which is downloadable from here, has no code patches - you can freely use the
+original version instead. Unfortunately, the last public release is

 <b>1.7.1</b> while this project requires at least
 @{[ a_href 'http://linux-ntfs.sourceforge.net/snapshots/','snapshot' ]} version
 <b>@{[ a_href 'http://linux-ntfs.sourceforge.net/snapshots/ntfsprogs-200309071734.tar.bz2','200309071734' ]}</b>
 <b>1.7.1</b> while this project requires at least
 @{[ a_href 'http://linux-ntfs.sourceforge.net/snapshots/','snapshot' ]} version
 <b>@{[ a_href 'http://linux-ntfs.sourceforge.net/snapshots/ntfsprogs-200309071734.tar.bz2','200309071734' ]}</b>


@@ -298,7 +298,7 @@ your convenience.</p></dd>
 
 <p>@{[ a_href 'http://lufs.sourceforge.net/lufs/','LUFS' ]} (Linux Userland File
 System) needs Linux kernel module driver (<i>lufs.o</i>) compatible with your
 
 <p>@{[ a_href 'http://lufs.sourceforge.net/lufs/','LUFS' ]} (Linux Userland File
 System) needs Linux kernel module driver (<i>lufs.o</i>) compatible with your

-running Linux kernel. Binary driver is supplied already precompiled for many
+running Linux kernel. The binary driver is supplied already precompiled for many

 Linux kernel versions in the binary packages above (<b>.i386.rpm</b> and
 <b>_i386.deb</b> archives).</p>
 
 Linux kernel versions in the binary packages above (<b>.i386.rpm</b> and
 <b>_i386.deb</b> archives).</p>
 


@@ -310,12 +310,12 @@ distribution vendor. You may need to install package
 Linux kernel version (<b>rpm&nbsp;-q&nbsp;kernel</b>) and re-run <span
 class="quote">/usr/share/lufs/prepmod</span>.</p>
 
 Linux kernel version (<b>rpm&nbsp;-q&nbsp;kernel</b>) and re-run <span
 class="quote">/usr/share/lufs/prepmod</span>.</p>
 

-<p><b>WARNING:</b> This 'captive' package may modify your found Linux kernel
+<p><b>WARNING:</b> This 'captive' package may modify your Linux kernel

 sources matching your currently running kernel version. These minor
 sources matching your currently running kernel version. These minor

-modifications may include dependencies rebuild, compiling build tools, fixes of
-several include files etc. All the modifications are done at the mount(8) time
+modifications may include a dependencies rebuild, compiling build tools, fixes of
+several include files, etc. All the modifications are done at the mount(8) time

 by the automatically executed <span class="quote">/usr/share/lufs/prepmod</span> script.
 by the automatically executed <span class="quote">/usr/share/lufs/prepmod</span> script.

-This behaviour was not present in the original
+This behavior was not present in the original

 @{[ a_href 'http://lufs.sourceforge.net/lufs/','LUFS' ]} distribution
 by @{[ a_href 'http://www.malinux.net/main/','Florin Malita' ]}.</p>
 
 @{[ a_href 'http://lufs.sourceforge.net/lufs/','LUFS' ]} distribution
 by @{[ a_href 'http://www.malinux.net/main/','Florin Malita' ]}.</p>
 


@@ -326,13 +326,13 @@ HERE
 print rightimg <<"HERE",'reactos','ReactOS',"a_href"=>'http://www.reactos.com/';
        <h2>The First Open Source MS-Windows Kernel API for Free OS</h2>
 
 print rightimg <<"HERE",'reactos','ReactOS',"a_href"=>'http://www.reactos.com/';
        <h2>The First Open Source MS-Windows Kernel API for Free OS</h2>
 

-       <p>Compatibility with existing binary Microsoft Windows file system drivers was
+       <p>Compatibility with the existing binary Microsoft Windows file system drivers has been

        reached. Microsoft Windows kernel system components required by these drivers
        reached. Microsoft Windows kernel system components required by these drivers

-       were analyzed and successfuly emulated in the GNU/Linux operating system.
-       Project brings Microsoft Windows kernel emulation framework to support even
-       other types Microsoft Windows drivers in the future.
-       <span class="productname">@{[ a_href 'http://www.reactos.com/','ReactOS' ]}</span>
-       code base made a big asset for this functionality.</p>
+       were analyzed and successfully emulated in the GNU/Linux operating system.
+       The project brings the Microsoft Windows kernel emulation framework to support even
+       other types of Microsoft Windows drivers in the future.
+       The <span class="productname">@{[ a_href 'http://www.reactos.com/','ReactOS' ]}</span>
+       code base proved to be a big asset for this functionality.</p>

 HERE
 
 
 HERE
 
 


@@ -345,7 +345,7 @@ print <<"HERE";
 <form action="@{[ top_dir("/Mailman.pl") ]}" method="post">
        <table border="1" class="mailman" style="border-collapse: collapse; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px;">
                <tr>@{[ map("<th>$_</th>",@lists) ]}</tr>
 <form action="@{[ top_dir("/Mailman.pl") ]}" method="post">
        <table border="1" class="mailman" style="border-collapse: collapse; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px;">
                <tr>@{[ map("<th>$_</th>",@lists) ]}</tr>

-               <tr><td>New versions announcements<br />
+               <tr><td>New version announcements<br />

                        (low traffic, recommended)</td>
                                <td>User support,<br />bug reports</td>
                                <td>Development</td>
                        (low traffic, recommended)</td>
                                <td>User support,<br />bug reports</td>
                                <td>Development</td>